Feb 6, 2020

User_talk:Rc7100

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I know [[User:Loiswade42|Lois]] has a lot of experience handling religion articles - let me ask her for her thoughts. I'm sure she'd have some good ideas :)
 
I know [[User:Loiswade42|Lois]] has a lot of experience handling religion articles - let me ask her for her thoughts. I'm sure she'd have some good ideas :)
   
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Hi Ryan,
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I just did a quick skim thru your [https://ift.tt/2S6cVCJ Article], and while I LOVE the title, I think your article reads as if you are addressing either someone who is ALREADY a Christian and looking for a way to defend their faith... or someone who is already a Christian and just wants to strengthen their own faith.
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I would suggest that instead of addressing "the faithful" with your article, perhaps instead you could answer the question of WHY we believe rather than HOW we believe as a way to both keep in line with the excellent title and a way to reach those who are truly curious about Christianity and Christians in general.
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Your thoughts?
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